Flash Fiction Friday (12)

Flash Fiction Friday is where a group of us writer types tell you a story in 100 words. No more, no less. The picture prompt this week was chosen by Heaven Liegh Eldeen.

Enjoy:

“Indeed, you’ve found her.”

“How can you tell, father?”

Dex pointed to the swirl of light green surrounding the girls pupil. Her eyes– a shocking mix of Spring and Summer grasses, blended harmoniously together. The picture captured her true fae essence. And punched Dex square in the gut. Despite the Queen hiding in the mortal world, he’d found her at last. His royal queen and long-lost wife. He’d given her ten years to get over it. She needed to come home. Sulking time was over.

It was difficult fending off female advances. He remained faithful. But not forever.

Lisa Worrall,  Bonni Sansom,  Naomi Shaw,  Lee Brazil,
ER Pierce,  Cyril J. Michaels,  Venus Cahill,  Jean Joachim,
Muffy Wilson,  Sara York,  Yvonne Nicolas,  Gemma Parkes,
Havan Fellows,  Cassandre Dayne,  Lune Ella Aldora,  Kendel Davi,

Katie Harper,  Kay Springsteen,  Davee Jones,  AuroraRose Andromeda,
Sherri Hayes

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I'm a mother, a wife, a reader, reviewer and a writer. I eat lots of chocolate, drink lots of ice coffee, and swear like a trucker with road rage. I'm a Virgo -- and I'm sometimes too honest. I can be over-emotional, and a tad crazy. You've been warned.


15 Responses to Flash Fiction Friday (12)

  1. Kendel Davi says:

    Great focus on the eye to bring us in even closer than the picture.

  2. Jean says:

    Nicely done. I’m intrigued and want to know more.

  3. Katie Harper says:

    Damn! What a great interpretation. I love taking a small detail and making it the only thing people see.

    GREAT JOB!!

  4. Sara York says:

    WOW, that was very good. Now we need the rest of the story!

  5. I love the fantasy twist in this. Cool post!

  6. Davee Jones says:

    Beautiful FFF, I love the description of her eyes!

  7. Gemma Parkes says:

    I love the way you focus on detail in these pictures, great story telling!

  8. Erika…think we should combine our Flashes together? ;) Woohoo for another fae-lover! Loved it.

  9. Havan says:

    Is this a part of a larger story? If so where the halibut can I find it????? Great FFF!!!!

  10. AuroraRose Andromeda says:

    Damn that was good. Loved the fae turn in it. Wonder what will/could happen next? Great!

  11. Bonni Sansom says:

    There are a lot of cliffhangers this week. I would love to know more. Great post.

  12. CJM says:

    Fabulous fantasy FFF!!

  13. Venus says:

    Love the description. Wonderful post.

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