Flash Fiction Friday (12)

on January 20, 2012 in Featured, Flash Fiction, Flash Friday with 15 comments by

Flash Fiction Friday is where a group of us writer types tell you a story in 100 words. No more, no less. The picture prompt this week was chosen by Heaven Liegh Eldeen.

Enjoy:

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“Indeed, you’ve found her.”

“How can you tell, father?”

Dex pointed to the swirl of light green surrounding the girls pupil. Her eyes– a shocking mix of Spring and Summer grasses, blended harmoniously together. The picture captured her true fae essence. And punched Dex square in the gut. Despite the Queen hiding in the mortal world, he’d found her at last. His royal queen and long-lost wife. He’d given her ten years to get over it. She needed to come home. Sulking time was over.

It was difficult fending off female advances. He remained faithful. But not forever.

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Katie Harper,  Kay Springsteen,  Davee Jones,  AuroraRose Andromeda,
Sherri Hayes

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ERP
I'm a mother, a wife, a reader, reviewer and a writer. I eat lots of chocolate, drink lots of ice coffee, and swear like a trucker with road rage. I'm a Virgo -- and I'm sometimes too honest. I can be over-emotional, and a tad crazy. You've been warned.

15 comments

  1. posted on Jan 20, 2012 at 2:44 PM  |  reply

    Wow! Love it!

  2. posted on Jan 20, 2012 at 3:05 PM  |  reply

    Fabulous

  3. posted on Jan 20, 2012 at 3:16 PM  |  reply

    Great focus on the eye to bring us in even closer than the picture.

  4. posted on Jan 20, 2012 at 3:17 PM  |  reply

    Nicely done. I’m intrigued and want to know more.

  5. posted on Jan 20, 2012 at 5:50 PM  |  reply

    Damn! What a great interpretation. I love taking a small detail and making it the only thing people see.

    GREAT JOB!!

  6. posted on Jan 20, 2012 at 7:27 PM  |  reply

    WOW, that was very good. Now we need the rest of the story!

  7. posted on Jan 20, 2012 at 8:54 PM  |  reply

    I love the fantasy twist in this. Cool post!

  8. posted on Jan 20, 2012 at 11:26 PM  |  reply

    Beautiful FFF, I love the description of her eyes!

  9. posted on Jan 20, 2012 at 11:27 PM  |  reply

    I love the way you focus on detail in these pictures, great story telling!

  10. posted on Jan 21, 2012 at 12:29 AM  |  reply

    Erika…think we should combine our Flashes together? ;) Woohoo for another fae-lover! Loved it.

  11. Havan
    posted on Jan 21, 2012 at 12:57 AM  |  reply

    Is this a part of a larger story? If so where the halibut can I find it????? Great FFF!!!!

  12. AuroraRose Andromeda
    posted on Jan 21, 2012 at 1:14 AM  |  reply

    Damn that was good. Loved the fae turn in it. Wonder what will/could happen next? Great!

  13. posted on Jan 21, 2012 at 3:47 PM  |  reply

    There are a lot of cliffhangers this week. I would love to know more. Great post.

  14. CJM
    posted on Jan 21, 2012 at 5:21 PM  |  reply

    Fabulous fantasy FFF!!

  15. posted on Jan 21, 2012 at 5:23 PM  |  reply

    Love the description. Wonderful post.

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