Flash Fiction Friday (17)

Flash fiction is here again. Yippee! 100 words to tell a story, no more…no less.

 

“Shhh now, don’t cry sweetie.”

“I can’t help it. It’s the worst thing that’s ever happened to me.”

“Well, now I don’t think that’s exactly true now, darlin’ is it?”

“Of course it is! What do you mean?”

“Uh. Nuttin’ of course. Shh. There now. You’ll be alright.”

“I’ll never be alright! Never! I can’t believe she did that to me. I won’t forgive her. Ever.”

“Your momma meant well, sweets. Really she did.”

“Oh I bet she did. I’m the laughing stock of the entire town now. God I hate her.”

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I'm a mother, a wife, a reader, reviewer and a writer. I eat lots of chocolate, drink lots of ice coffee, and swear like a trucker with road rage. I'm a Virgo -- and I'm sometimes too honest. I can be over-emotional, and a tad crazy. You've been warned.


10 Responses to Flash Fiction Friday (17)

  1. Elicia says:

    Oh come on! I need to know what happened. You’re such a tease! ;-)

  2. Bonni Sansom says:

    You can’t just leave us hangin’. we have to know what the mother said. Teaser. Great post!

  3. Naomi says:

    What happened? When is part 2? Great flasher

  4. Eden Connor says:

    My mother gave me more than one of these moments, I completely feel her pain. Nice job!

  5. Sara York says:

    Dang, what happened. I have to know.

  6. Gemma Parkes says:

    Part two next week? Ha, you are such a tease with these posts! Fun!

  7. Davee Jones says:

    wow, her own momma…that’s sad

  8. AuroraRose Andromeda says:

    Aww darn! LOL! I love a good cliffhanger. I wonder what had happened between her and her mother? Def have me curious. Great post.

  9. Michelle says:

    That isnt fair, I want to know what her evil Mom did that was so bad. But whatever it was, the girl should thank her Mom, cause it got her held in those gorgeous arms.lol

  10. LOL! Wonder what her mom did to her that has her naked and crying.

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