Friday is upon us, and here is my latest flash fiction
A 100 word story based on the picture below. Please follow the links to the other flashers and see what they came up with based on this photo.
Here are my 100 words, no more, no less.
“Did you get my package?” His ominous voice asked, when I picked up the phone.
“Uh – Yep. Um, I don’t know what it is though, and the boxes are huge. I started looking through, but…” I trailed off, because shit, what the fuck did he send me? And another thing…who the hell was this man?
“Hmm. It’s a puzzle, I had it specially made for you. Put it together and then call the number on the scrap paper in the box.”
“Oh – last thing. Your husband’s home. Might want to hide the pieces.”
Click.
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I love it…I want to know who he is….and what the puzzle is all about…
Great job but I want to know what it looks like when it’s all together
Awesomesauce! I loved it. Man oh man, that man is trouble. Excellent flash.
This is a clever cliffhanger…………who is he? What is it, what is it used for? How can you hide it? Will you know once assembled what it’s used for? Why don’t we want her husband to see it and how the Hell does he know that hubby is home? Come on…….give it up! Love it!:) xo
Loved the Flash, but you’ve left me wanting more, more more!
Wow, what a cliff hanger! That was fun!
Fun and intriguing, quick hide the pieces!
I agree with everyone else. I wanted to have more of the story. Great post!