Flash Fiction Friday (23) ~ WTF

Friday is upon us, and here is my latest flash fiction :) A 100 word story based on the picture below. Please follow the links to the other flashers and see what they came up with based on this photo.

 

Here are my 100 words, no more, no less.

 

 

“Did you get my package?” His ominous voice asked, when I picked up the phone.

“Uh – Yep. Um, I don’t know what it is though, and the boxes are huge. I started looking through, but…” I trailed off, because shit, what the fuck did he send me? And another thing…who the hell was this man?

“Hmm. It’s a puzzle, I had it specially made for you. Put it together and then call the number on the scrap paper in the box.”

“Oh – last thing. Your husband’s home. Might want to hide the pieces.”

Click.

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I'm a mother, a wife, a reader, reviewer and a writer. I eat lots of chocolate, drink lots of ice coffee, and swear like a trucker with road rage. I'm a Virgo -- and I'm sometimes too honest. I can be over-emotional, and a tad crazy. You've been warned.


8 Responses to Flash Fiction Friday (23) ~ WTF

  1. I love it…I want to know who he is….and what the puzzle is all about…

  2. Kendel Davi says:

    Great job but I want to know what it looks like when it’s all together :)

  3. S. J. Maylee says:

    Awesomesauce! I loved it. Man oh man, that man is trouble. Excellent flash.

  4. Muffy Wilson says:

    This is a clever cliffhanger…………who is he? What is it, what is it used for? How can you hide it? Will you know once assembled what it’s used for? Why don’t we want her husband to see it and how the Hell does he know that hubby is home? Come on…….give it up! Love it!:) xo

  5. Venus says:

    Loved the Flash, but you’ve left me wanting more, more more!

  6. Wow, what a cliff hanger! That was fun!

  7. Gemma Parkes says:

    Fun and intriguing, quick hide the pieces!

  8. Bonni Sansom says:

    I agree with everyone else. I wanted to have more of the story. Great post!

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