Tantalizing Tuesday (6) Wait

Tantalizing Tuesday is here! I hope you all had a fantabulous weekend. Lets kick the week off right with a seductive little two hundred word story. After you read, please visit the other flashers for their two hundred word stories <3

 

Jane wanted a night she’d never forget. A night filled with the dark desires she’d kept locked hidden within her own mind and fantasies. She’d over heard her best friends talking about a service that catered to discrete intimate desires. She’d laughed at the card her friend, Mandi, handed her that read, “I’ve been D.I.D” and held only a number.

She’d sat in her bedroom staring at the card, turning it over and over, before picking up the phone and hoping to make all her fantasies come true.

“Thank you for calling D.I.D, please listen to the following options, as our menu has changed.”

After listening, pressing, and biting her nails, Jane confirmed her address with an operator named “Jack”.  One week later she received a card in the mail, along with a dozen roses on her front porch.

When Jane opened the envelope, a key card, along with a folded piece of paper fell out:

“Be in room 569 of the Radison at 7pm. Remove your clothes and wait on your knees with your eyes closed.”

And so here she waited — her palms were sweaty and her heart raced.

A gruff voice whispered, “Good Girl, Let’s get started, shall we?”

 

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I'm a mother, a wife, a reader, reviewer and a writer. I eat lots of chocolate, drink lots of ice coffee, and swear like a trucker with road rage. I'm a Virgo -- and I'm sometimes too honest. I can be over-emotional, and a tad crazy. You've been warned.


15 Responses to Tantalizing Tuesday (6) Wait

  1. Dianne Hartsock says:

    Sounds dangerous and fun! Hope he’s drop dead gorgeous for her. :)

  2. Lee Brazil says:

    Yes- a little dangerous…let’s hope the fun outweighs the danger!

  3. Hey! I got one of those cards just last Friday and when I…wait, this is your teaser!

    This was wonderful! I loved it!

  4. No wonder her palms are sweaty! Lovely anticipation and sense of danger.

  5. Don Abdul says:

    Hot damn! So tantalizing indeed, I definitely would love to read more :)
    Well done ER.

  6. Gemma Parkes says:

    Sexy! I love the picture and your words fit it perfectly!

  7. Naomi says:

    Excellent teaser. And you left a cliffhanger. I hope she does as she’s told

  8. Venus says:

    Fantastic teaser! I hope all her fnatasies come true.

  9. Muffy Wilson says:

    ER, you never fail to send me flying. What a wondrous concept, teaser. I’ve been D.I.D., indeed! Hook, line and fabulously delicious teaser. YummyYou.:) xo

  10. CJM says:

    Love the anticipation you’ve built with this!

  11. Ray Sostre says:

    Nice Teaser E.R., great build-up to it.

  12. Awesome teaser! I wonder what pleasures he has in store for her. Very Hot!

  13. Dangerous, and sexy..Loved the tease..I want to know more..

  14. Bonni Sansom says:

    Excellent teaser. Love your writing E.R.

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